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Post by Lord Lovrina on Feb 1, 2011 17:11:33 GMT -8
Oh, holy hell, this was terrible! This is worse than the fanfic I wrote in THIRD FUCKING GRADE! How the hell do you do worse than that! Hell, this is probably worse then the creative writing assignment I did in FIRST GRADE! (Then again, I'm apparently a "natural writer", but I myself doubt that, so my point still stands.) Agreed. Even the fic I wrote when I was 5 years old is better than that. And that fic was written in crayon.
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Post by Anya the Purple on Feb 3, 2011 22:38:11 GMT -8
Oh, holy hell, this was terrible! This is worse than the fanfic I wrote in THIRD FUCKING GRADE! How the hell do you do worse than that! Hell, this is probably worse then the creative writing assignment I did in FIRST GRADE! (Then again, I'm apparently a "natural writer", but I myself doubt that, so my point still stands.)
Same. I wrote a story in first grade about two zebras who lost their stripes and had to go find them; I think that was better. Hm, I wonder where that went, anyway. Bet my mother still has it.
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Post by mrsdamienthorn on Feb 4, 2011 9:25:00 GMT -8
These stories... I don't even know anymore...
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Post by neoeevee on Feb 5, 2011 13:53:47 GMT -8
These stories... I don't even know anymore... -300 Faith in humanity thanks to these fics. -500 if I find out people actually like them.
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Post by mrsdamienthorn on Feb 7, 2011 11:14:24 GMT -8
Someone does. But they're a troll too, so that doesn't count.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2012 14:44:55 GMT -8
You guys....just....I'm ashamed of you. I mean I really like this story and you guys are just bent on tearing it apart. And you're totally being mean to Erin...what do you mean the fight between James and Edward wasn't epic? I thought it was the hottest stuff.
Haha! I'm just kidding. But seriously I'm absolutely 100% certain she's a trolololo. First of all why does she demonize her father yet portray him as a nice guy? Second of all why does she constantly type heaven as 'heathen'? There's just no way in the world she isn't a troll. I refuse to believe otherwise!
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Post by makoeyes on Feb 12, 2013 8:24:37 GMT -8
You guys....just....I'm ashamed of you. I mean I really like this story and you guys are just bent on tearing it apart. And you're totally being mean to Erin...what do you mean the fight between James and Edward wasn't epic? I thought it was the hottest stuff. Haha! I'm just kidding. But seriously I'm absolutely 100% certain she's a trolololo. First of all why does she demonize her father yet portray him as a nice guy? Second of all why does she constantly type heaven as 'heathen'? There's just no way in the world she isn't a troll. I refuse to believe otherwise! I really, really hope that she is indeed trolling. That would make me feel so much better.
This was hilarious, Phoenix. ^^ I hope you do more. As for snarkin buddies, could you do Lucy (Diclonius Queen)? Her rage is usually rather composed so it would be interesting to see if she freaks out over this or not.
EDIT: Looked at the dates. That's pretty bad of me to not even look at the dates. Just whenever I started reading this thread, it was still on the first page so I assumed that it couldn't be too old.
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