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Post by Admin on Dec 28, 2011 9:48:57 GMT -8
Already posted about this elsewhere, but I've made a sort of blog where I'm intending to continue this as a series of short stories. I've already gained some recognition for the first installment, but I'd like to know what my fellow TS writers think. As I post more installments, I'll probably update this post with direct links, if anyone's interested. ConCrit is certainly welcome. Mission Zero.
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shiko
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Post by shiko on Dec 28, 2011 10:36:32 GMT -8
I can't say much bad about it mostly because I like to think of you as a better writer than me. What I like the most is the dialog, if that helps.
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Post by Admin on Dec 28, 2011 10:38:33 GMT -8
I can't say much bad about it mostly because I like to think of you as a better writer than me. What I like the most is the dialog, if that helps. Doesn't need to be anything bad to be concrit, just something that you think I need to improve. *nod* But, yes, from its being published in the AUK Review (a yearly publication my uni puts out), seems everyone who has a comment to make likes how I do dialog.
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