The Nightmare Man- feedback needed

[annabellamy]

Hi people.

I've finished my book- 'The Nightmare Man'- and I'm self-publishing it soon. I'd really appreciate if you could read it and give me some feedback. Also, I'm concerned about my punctuation and would really appreciate if you can tell me where I;m going wrong with it.

The file's attached so you can have a loot at it.

Thank you!

AGB xx

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[annabellamy]

Okay: It's the first book of the series, and the main reason I wrote it was because I needed the characters to be in the position where they could fully develop as the series progresses.

It's about a family whose lives start to unravel as an ancient legend begins to come to fruition. Matt and Richard have very bizarre dreams which confirm certain things for two other characters- Odin and Loki.

The story is quite psychological, and based loosely off of Norse mythology.